I think this is really good work. The style is quite original, in my eyes, manga or not (manga style is best anyway). Don't let other people tell you to change your artistic style. They just want your work to suit their tastes. Selfish pricks. Lol. Love Riven. Nice work.
Really love this picture and I love the changes you've made to her outfit. =3 The thing that is probably making the neck seem so long is the way her right shoulder is angled. Together with the cloth angle, they both kinda emphasize the neck line, making it look really long. Maybe if her shoulder was angled little more upwards and one little more curved line was added under the cloth, to kinda show the end of the neck.
The thing that is probably making the neck seem so long is the way her right shoulder is angled. Together with the cloth angle, they both kinda emphasize the neck line, making it look really long. Maybe if her shoulder was angled little more upwards and one little more curved line was added under the cloth, to kinda show the end of the neck.